Friday, March 25, 2016

How to Gain an Appreciation for Revision

I received a message this week from a regular workshop attendee about a student of her own. Apparently, the student was having a hard time finishing any of her creative writing assignments, and her teacher was hoping I would have some ideas of how to help her. After asking some follow-up questions, I learned that the student had plenty of enthusiasm for writing, and just needed some guidance to make proper use of it.

The situation sounded pretty common actually. Many writers deal with inner-editors that make them  feel like they have to get a story right the first time. In the case of this student, she was so concerned about writing the story correctly from the beginning that she would try to plan out to the number of sentences in each paragraph! While this may be an extreme case, I think that the advice I gave her teacher would be of benefit to any writer that doesn't understand the benefits and pleasures that come with editing.

Editing and revision are often misunderstood by novice writers. They think that "writing" is just the creation of the first draft and that editing is something non-creative or hard that you have to do after you've had your fun. The truth is, revision is the best part! It's when the writer gets to take something that was merely "ok" and makes it exceptional. It's shuffling words around and changing everything and creating your dream house out of the temporary shack that was just keeping the rain off before.

If you find yourself paralyzed with performance anxiety when writing your story, you might try out the advice I gave to this student's teacher. My recommendation was to use her writing sessions to work on revision, rather than first draft writing (counter-intuitive I know, but hear me out). My advice was to have the student revisit a finished short piece that she had already done in class, then ask her what she wished it had looked like. Questions at this point could include "What would you have done if you had more time?" or "What do you think could make it even better?"

The key to this exercise is to change something significant about the piece. If you find yourself freezing, then try assigning yourself something specific to change. It can be anything. Make a character sad instead of happy. Change the ending. Turn them all into elephants. Just something to make you think of every story draft as a malleable object. Above all, have fun! At worst, writing should be a pleasant chore, like working in the garden or building a model. Remember that you are writing (and revising!) because you love to do it.

Friday, March 18, 2016

Beast Hunting in my Back Yard

A Capitol Forest creek similar to the one by my home
There’s an old pearl of wisdom that says that a writer should write what he knows. Personally, I think that writers should write what they love, which will motivate them to do the necessary research to make the story feel authentic. But even research can’t help with some types of writing, and that’s where a writer’s imagination comes into play. This is especially important to fantasy writers like me. After all, there’s no life experience or research that can tell you exactly how it feels to ride upon a dragon. Still, there are occasions when life experiences can be an inspiration for fantastic scenarios, and this week I had one of those experiences.

First, some background. I live on the edge of Washington State’s Capitol Forest, consisting of over 90,000 acres of temperate rain forest. This is where I grew up, and I’ve always loved having so much greenery and animal life nearby. I’ll often watch red squirrels and hummingbirds out my window when I should be working, and there’s a small family of deer that I encounter nearly every day while walking my dogs.

Of course, there are downsides to living in such close proximity to nature. My family has kept chickens for several years now, and we’re always on the lookout for predators. I’ve seen a hawk dive-bomb past my second-story window more than once, and we’ve had our share of raccoons, coyotes, and even the occasional mountain lion sighting. I understand that there have been bear sightings as well over the years, though these are happily very rare.

Still, though taking care of the chickens is primarily my responsibility, I rarely have to worry about their safety. Mostly I just keep them fed and watered, collecting their eggs and trying to keep their pens in some state of working condition. I also let them out every afternoon to roam a bit and pick at the scratch and greenery.

Last Wednesday, I had just finished these daily chores and was sitting down to get back to work when I heard a terrible ruckus outside. I ran downstairs to the sound of excited squawks and went outside to find all of the hens hiding under a rhododendron bush while several roosters clucked defiantly as they strutted out in the open.

My first thought was that a hawk had dove at them, but a quick inspection of the nearby trees showed no raptors in the area. I then set about searching around our property, and soon found a sad little pile of white-gold feathers near the creek that runs past our home. Standing over the scene and trying to puzzle out what had happened, I spied a single feather a few yards away on the creek bank. I was suddenly compelled to follow the trail. 

A close-up view of a devil's claw
I rushed back up to the house and pulled on a jacket and my work gloves. For some reason I felt that I had to have some sort of heavy implement in hand, so I grabbed an old garden hoe and made my way back down to the creek to begin following the trail of feathers. It was slow going. Ferns, fallen branches, and treacherous devil’s claw (also known as devil’s club, a nasty plant that grows up to ten feet tall and is covered with thorns) slowed my progress to a noisy crawl. The underbrush also made tracking difficult as I spied each feather, fought my way to it, then had to stop and search until I could find the next one.

It wasn’t until I’d been on the hunt for several minutes that I realized how excited I was. I could feel my heart pounding in my chest. I think part of my excitement came from a sense of determination brought on by a feeling of duty. Taking care of the chickens was my responsibility after all, and it was my job to track down the killer of one of my charges. There was also the thrill of discovery. Could I find the next feather? Would I find the victim, or even the killer?

It was another minute or two before I realized that there was a little fear in me as well. From my time spent living on the Navajo Reservation in New Mexico, I’d had some experience dealing with wild dogs and I felt reasonably confident that I could handle myself if the chicken had been taken by a wandering stray. But there were other possibilities. What if it was a coyote, or even a mountain lion? I suddenly started looking up into the trees with as much intensity as I searched the ground, wishing I’d brought something more formidable than a garden hoe with me.

As much as I’d like to dramatize this experience, I’ll stay totally truthful in this account. I’m not a great tracker, and nearly gave up several times while searching for an errant feather. When the trail finally ran out, I looked around for several moments before resolving to give up. I turned, and suddenly saw the still form of the golden hen lying under a nearby drooping cedar. I jumped and my heart raced, but the killer was long gone.

I never found out what killed the bird, though I suspect it was a coyote, spooked by my unstealthy advance through the brush and dropping its prize for a hasty getaway. I’m sure there are those who will laugh at what may seem like a simple task given emotional weight by a well-exercised imagination. But looking back at it now, I’m certain that this experience will stay with me for a long time, and who knows? Perhaps even the great beast hunter Keltin Moore will gain some inspiration from a would-be tracker following feathers behind his home in the forest.

Friday, March 11, 2016

Top Ten Lessons I’ve Learned from Playing Board Games

10. Dice rolling is not a skill.

9. If you’re arguing over what piece or color you’ll play as, it’s going to be a very long game night.

8. Don’t assume other people are cheating just because you don’t understand all of the rules.

7. Everyone helps when putting the game away.

6. If you bring a game to play, make sure you know how to play it.

5. You’re not allowed to hate a game just because you never win it.

4. If it’s a long game, use the time between turns to chat with the other players. Leave your phone in your pocket.

3. Don’t play with handicaps or head-starts unless you’re playing with a very young child.

2. When in doubt, play a cooperative game.

1. If you’re not going to win, play against yourself.

Friday, March 4, 2016

Preparing for my First Q&A Video

Lately, I’ve been wanting to connect more with my fans. While I try to respond to every comment made on my blog and various social media platforms, I often think about the many people all over the world who read my books, visit my blog, and subscribe to my newsletter and yet I’ve never met or heard from them. Of course, it’s impossible to know every person that’s read one of my books at this point (a happy milestone) but nonetheless I’d like to make some effort to reach out and interact with as many fans and friends as I can.

With that in mind, I'd like to try something new this month. Throughout March, I'll be accepting questions for a video Q&A that I'll post to my YouTube channel in April. Question topics could include my stories, the craft of writing, gaming, or my various likes and dislikes. At the end of the month I'll select my favorite questions and answer them in the video, though I may save other questions for a future video.

You can submit questions by leaving a comment below or via e-mail at lindsay@lindsayschopfer.com, as well as comments and PM’s on Facebook, Twitter, or Google+. Please notify me if you do not want me to mention your first name along with your question in the video (nobody's last name will be shared).

I look forward to seeing your questions!